Thursday, September 23, 2010
I wish I never knew my dad all he is in my life is just someone who brings me down he goes to work then gets home and drinks until he passes out he never calls me to visit with me or to say hi he was such a pain to deal with he was abusive to me and my brother and my mom was sick to her stomach she was dying at the moment she was constantly in the hospital day after day night after night I didn’t know what to do with my life one night she got upset with the doctor so she tried to kill her self so that is a little of my life.
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That's how my dad was before he split. One day he'll see what he did and he'll regret it. You need to make this a little longer.
im sorry about that man thats sad. i never really hade a dad groing up. so i dont no what your going though. but i can tell you this it will make you a better person and a better dad to your kids.
peace.
i think the legth could get alittle longer. you did great expressing your self. my birth mom and dad drank so know how you feel
I thought its good that your getting out a little peace of history about yourself to others.One thing I would have you do is go a little longer and use periods and commas. Other than that good job and keep it up.
Make things a little longer, and put a better mental picture for us, good job opening up.
Over all I liked it it made me sad just by reading it. one thing I think you can improve on is your length i thought it was really vague. But i do feel your pain dude I'm sorry that a cool kid like you had to go through something like that.
I know how you feel my dad is the same way but he use to beat me when he was drunk. my mom left him because he hit her too. I how you don't care who reads this so i got a lot of respect for you. the only thing i can say is read it and make sure it understandable
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