What the f*** are you doing “don’t let him beat you fight back” I can’t dad he’s to big he’s like 5 years older then me “I CAN”T” I don’t give a damn. He hit your little brother, quit acting like a little b**** and kick that little kid’s ass Ok…
AFTER THE FIGHT:
I can’t believe that you let him f*** you up. You’re a disgrace.. I’m putting you in boxing so they can use you as a punching bag for the kids who actually have balls! But dad. Don’t call me dad you’re not my son I’m putting you in boxing first thing tomorrow morning ok.. But i'm kind of nerves; i've never actually been in a boxing ring. I know that everyone’s going to be better then me because their there practicing a lot right? Yeah but as long as you try you should be ok. Ok dad
THE NEXT DAY:
Get the hell up.!!! Its time to go! Where are we going? I just got off the phone with the trainer from the gym down the street we’re going so you can meet him in 5 minutes hurry up and get ready. ”ok”. I hope you’re ready. Don’t think that their going to go easy on you. Those kids are going to try to hurt you and knock your jaw out of place, so promise me that you’ll give it your all and not act like you did yesterday. I promise dad I’ll give it my all. Can I ask you something? What? “Are you drunk? You smell like liquor” That’s my business don’t worry about me i’m fine just worry about your self. I don’t really want to do this dad. I’m sorry but you don’t have a choice are you ready to go? Yeah I guess, lets go.
AT THE GYM:
He bud what’s your name? Gustavo. I spoke to your dad over the phone he said you were exited so go put these shorts on and strap up. What do you mean strap up? Go put on the gloves and jump in the ring. Already? Yeah we need to see what you do on your own and we can’ll take it from there. Ok. Hey JR get in there with G it’s his first day. ARE YOU READY G “YEAH” ARE YOU READY JR “YEAH” FIGHT!!!
AFTER THE FIGHT
I’m impressed you did a lot better then I expected. I can see a couple things you need to work on. So will you work with my son? Yes id be honored to. What time do you get off school lil man? 3:00 be here tomorrow after school at 4:00 o’clock ready to go. Get a lot of rest your going to need your energy tomorrow. Ok coach. Well see you tomorrow.
12 comments:
I like the story..
In a way i could reminance on it because growing up my grandpa made me do things i didn't wanna do like go too a lot sports i hated too do and i would just hate it.
with the while liqour thing with your dad i can see that also accept with my moms i would be able too tell she would be on something when she was nice too me.
All we can is keep our heads up.
Well This is a cool story, that (I would think) brings courage to the readers. Hey man I know you got skill in fighting, but you might be missing one thing. Heart. That is a lot inside the boxing ring. I would know, I also took boxing in Brigham City (where I am from) it's hard, But if your confident and honestly put your mind into something, Then I am confident that you or anybody can do whatever they want. Even beat someone down that's 5 years older then you. But you know I understand you. It would be hard with a dad like that, I also understand that it sucked to disappoint him. But this was a well written story. It has little to no grammar problems, Good work!
I liked your story. Its cool how you did boxing. I am sure you learned alot from it. It had quite a bit of detail and a good story line behind it. I really enjoyed reading it.
in life we do alot of things we dont like or want to but somtimes there good for us or your dad just trying to help you. you know.
Dang. I know what it feels like to have to live up to this expectation that your parents want you to. My brothers threw me around and would beat on me to toughen me up, and then I actually started fighting back and my dad didn't like that I was getting aggressive so he put me in boxing. They taught me a lot. I wish I was still in it, but one thing I learned from it was controlling what techniques they taught me that I don't use it in the real world. It would be cheating yourself out. I'm lucky my hands didn't get tied, or my charges I have would be worse. Got major respect for you. Stay strong.
♥Elee.
Wow! That must of been hard. I know how it feels to have your dad want you to be what they want you to be. My dad used to push me and push me to workout and lose weight cause he wanted me to be a cheerleader. And i was bigger than all the other skinny girls. And he wanted me to dye my hair back to blond so i would fit in with them. It was really hard for me to deal with that. But one day i just told him this is my life. I will do what i want the way i want. I told him i liked to be thicker. I didn't wanna be skinny.
I liked my body the way it was. So good job with dealing with that. And you used go details in your story.
I don't know what to tell you my dad was something like your dad, but he would never pay shi* for me. I Think your dad did love you he just had a strange way of showing you his love for you. I hope you remember them hurtful words your dad sad to you and that you teach your kids different. I know that your old man is gone now and much respect for him, but do you think that he would want different for you than the thug life? Do you think he would be sorry for what he went wrong on?
hey mijo i think you could calm down on your language, other then that i think your good. you did good on your spelling, but the gram-or; its inappropriate i think you need practice, but don't get me wrong practice is always good. practice makes perfect. keep up the good work buddy your doing good.
I liked the story, it sounded like your dad ws pretty hard on you. But all parents have their own way of telling you to be all you can be in life. My Family always messed around with boxing and wrestling, it got us closer in a way. You did a good job, keep it up!.
Wow! That must of been hard for you. I know what you mean because you know what my dad was kind of like that. My dad use to tell me back then what type of close i had to wear and what i couldn't wear. He would make me wear the clothes even though I didn't like it. But you know in a way he just didn't want guys to look at me because he was over protected with me he didn't like me wearing tight jeans or open shirts but i still did when he didn't now. I like this you did a good job.
Hey friend! So in other words you can kick my A** lol. My dad use to be like that, but with movies! He use to make me watch scary movies with him!! Like the Emely Rose one whatever it is and this clown onw. so now i hate clowns!! Haha i've been mentally abuse lol. Anyway atleast you got to learn how to box! That's cool cause now you can protect your famaly and friends! Friends like me!! [:
"what the f*** are you doing" My dad would say that to me to if I just let someone hit my little brother. my dad prob would beet me. good job
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