Friday, January 7, 2011
My Fate
I believe that we human beings cant control are own destines because we never know what’s going to happen every day. So like my brothers they are in wheel chairs and they didn’t want to be in a wheel chair god choose for them. Do you think they like being in their wheel chairs? Do you think they want to die in the e next year or two no the want to get older not die by the age of 20 or 13.they want to live till there like 60 or 70 but that’s not going to happen. Would you want to die at the age of 20 or 13? Probable not you would want to live for along time yes you would but you cant choose that.
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i think you d add to it and make it longer. you could use better conventions and add comma's. i like how you explained this. I'm sorry you brother is in a wheel chair.
i would say that we can choose our own destiny. And I say that because we can choose what to so with our actions . even though we dont know every thing that is going to happen every day but we choose to act on those challenges.
i think you explained good but need commas and cenventions
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