I think people hide their emotions because their don’t want to get made fun of get beat up in school but they’re just beating themself up inside and outside because people need to learned how to express their emotions because if not it will start bottle up inside and they will start believing what they here saying that good enough for anything.
They think that cant do any thing with their life doing nothing right cause that what there were told there hole life they scared to stick for there self and till people to stop making fun of them and let them no that they hurting your feeling and express what you feeling to them and find something that make you happy and life and go after and express your feeling.
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That was a good idea to write about. It all made sense.
I Liked the hole bottling it up inside. I think alot of people do just that. It made sence. You could work on your spelling i little bit though.
I think you did a good job on hitting the main points of people hilding in their emotions. I think you can work on your grammer a little. But for the most part you did a good job at staying on the subject.
Damon, I liked your story man it hits what your talking about and goes into detail about the subject. Great job, next time add a little more
I agree with you that we hide what we are feeling because we are worried about being embarrassed.
I also agree with you that by letting out our emotions, we can be happier and have a healthier life.
Dont be afraid of telling otheres how you feel. remember what doesnt kill you will make you stronger. you need to put more periods in this though.
Nice way to present this topic. I agree, a lot of people will hide there emotions because of their peers. It sucks but it is true. I liked what you had to write, but there were a few simple mistakes. Like proper periods, correct spelling, and correct grammar
i think that this is true but i think there is more to it. but you did good job, but i think that you should work on the spelling and grammer and going into more depth on what you are thinking about.
i would told-ally agree with you on this people do get made fun of for showing their emotions.
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