Benjamin Franklin is most known for being president and an inventor. Benjamin Franklin was really smart because he got to skip ahead a grade in Latin school. Later on his life Benjamin Franklin discovered electricity. His greatest accomplishment was that he got to be the fourth president. He was really successful because he succeeded in life even though he was poor and had mostly no education.
Benjamin Franklin did not graduate from his school. Benjamin attended to Latin school and he got to step ahead a grade, but Benjamin father took him out of school because he only had money to send him for two years, so his school ended when he was ten years old. When Benjamin was 12 he became an apprentice for his brother James which was a printer, James taught Benjamin the printing trade. When Benjamin was denied to write a letter for publication, Benjamin adopted the pseudonym of Mrs. Silence Dogood a middle age widow. Mrs. Dogood letters were published, and became a subject of conversation around town. James, Benjamin’s brother was unhappy when he discovered that the populary correspondent was his younger brother.
Benjamin Franklin’s greatest achievement that he did was discovering electricity. One day Benjamin wondered how lighting was made or what it was. Benjamin wanted to prove to people that lightning involved electricity. On one stormy night in 1752, Benjamin started to fly his kite with key tied to the string and lightning hit his kite and he could feel the shock. If it wasn’t for Benjamin discovering electricity our world wouldn’t be the same as it is. Benjamin helped our world a lot for example we wouldn’t have TV’s, computers, speakers, radios and other stuff that uses electricity.
Benjamin Franklin exemplifies the creed of success.
Benjamin Franklin shows us that us that he was successful, because he got to be president of the United States. Benjamin worked really hard to be president and succeeded, he deserved it. Another thing that Benjamin was successful at was discovering electricity. He also succeeded in Latin school, he got to skip ahead a grade, that shows us that he was a successful person.
7 comments:
1-Good job telling how he discovered electricity, his greatest accomplishment, in detail. It helps the reader better understand it.
2-Talk about other parts of his life such as: Free Masonry, debating, designing the one dollar bill with Illuminati symbols and other underground, significant accomplishments.
3-I didn't know he was a president. I also didn't know that he never graduated, or even attended, high school.
i like how you explain with extraordinary words. you could work on your punctuation. i learned that he went to Latin school.
1.You did really good at explaining what he did in his life.
2.You could have worded things a little bit different and i think you didn't finish it.
3.That he got to step ahead of his grade.
your paragraph was amazing i love your story
you don't need to improve
i didn't know he skip a grade because he was smart
love natalia
i liked that he fulfilled his dream, onehting that you need to improve is nothing, and i learned that he tried for president and succeeded that is awesome
you were very pacific detail good job
make your paragraph longer
i didnt know hes pather left him when he was 2
love natalia
i didnt know that benjamin franklin had a brother or that he went to a latin school, i like how you told the story about what he did to see what lightening didand how he figured out about electricity, i think you shoulddouble space it next time just to see what it would look like.
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