Rosa parks was the first African American, to fight for the civil rights because she didn’t give up her seat on the bus, for a white man she got thrown off the bus, from the same bus driver. Rosa parks went to jail for a long time because she didn’t want to give her seat up for a white man she was really brave for what she did she change the discrimination it was the best thing someone every did.
Her greatest accomplish was to fight for the civil right understand that choices the Rosa Parks have result she had the choice to get up and give her seat away but she had the choice to not give her seat up she took the consequence to the next level Rosa Parks know what she did she knew what was right or wrong she just want it to help other people with colored people she was trying to help everybody
Rosa Parks work it really hard to give them the equal right, to all the colored people, she fought for the right, she want everybody to have the same things as everyone she didn’t like when people were treating people with no respect Rosa Parks wants everybody to be equal she just want everybody to respect each other and she got what she really want it she basic change the community for everybody.
Understand that choices that she made brought up to a big mass, the put her in jail but she does understand that she would get in trouble later but nothing stop her, she did what her heart desire and that was to do the right thing she had so many choices I mean everybody have the choices, to do good or bad things everybody gets in trouble once in there life time she was fighting for what was right she didn’t do anything really.
Because of Rosa Park’s choices she did, took a big responsibility for her on actions she went to jail for saving everybody civil right well she tried for a long time and she got what she want, it was a hard work for her, well she got some help from other people to they also supported her.
Work sited:
Ashby Ruth, Civil right, Freedom Rider (Courageous Citizen) New York / London 2008
“Rosa Parks” Wikipedia. (3-16-11): 3-18-11. www.wikipedia.com
5 comments:
I think you did good taking your time and also listing specific examples of their achievements that they had accomplished in their life.I think that you can improve it by making the paragraphs a little longer.one cool new thing that I learned is that she was the first African American that actually fought for her freedom and others freedom as well.
1.You did good at telling about how she fought for peoples rights.
2.You missed a lot of your periods and commas and some for it was kind of confusing.
3.That she got arrested for not giving up her set to a white man.
you did good on explaining how she was and why she went to jail and all that stuff. i think you should have written more about who she was and how she became who she is today. i didnt know that Rosa Parks was the first african american to fight for the civil right but you did good on explaining it.
thinking about this is one the right and greatest things that was done in the civil right movement i think that this could have more facts in her report but what we need to learn from this is that we shouldn't discrimanate
This is a really good story because you have good wording and a lot of good information. good job!
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