In my childhood I had my daddy around with me.
I was happy, because he was around me and all of his kids.
My daddy had a drinking problem.
That was one of my daddy’s trails in his life.
He tried to stop drinking.
Sometimes he would be sober for a couple of days.
My daddy was always telling me that I’m like a butterfly, because I’m beautiful and bright like a butterfly.
I lost my daddy at age 12.
He got murdered for no reason, but I know he’s in a better place.
So he won’t even suffer even though it’s hard to think about.
I got to come to realize he’s not on earth or here with me.
9 comments:
Nice job you did really well on your poem. It's really sad to here about your dad. I'm sorry that you had to go true such thing.
I like this poem. That is a hard thing to deal with. You are very strong for dealing with this. You are an amazing person. Keep doing good and make him proud!
n1ce work ii like ur pome soeey about ur dad.....
I think that poem was very cool. it's almost like i could feel your pain. I think this is one of the best poems
i really think you did good on this poem. an im sorry that happen in your life but look you made i though it an its made you stronger.
I love your poem. I can relate to this because i lost my dad at age 9 from him committing suicide back in 2001. And it's still kind of hard for me to forget about it at all.
I like this poem a lot! I'm sorry to hear about your dad. That must be really hard. Keep your head up!
Hey when i first read this i cried. I'm sorry that you had to go through this i know that it must have been very hard for you to deal with. I want you to know that i'm here for you and that i think that your poems have a way to speak to others and that you can help alot of poeple to feel not alone. Spread your wings fly like a butterfly and make the best out of you.
i like how u expressed your emoyions just by talking about your dad
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