Friday, April 8, 2011

Who is Melinda going to connect to?


I think that she is going to connect to Mr. Freeman because she is quiet and she is a Imaginer because she is very sarcastic and she likes art and she still will do anything for Mr. Freeman because he sounds like an awesome teacher because she and her classmates can use their imagination she can also be with a great substitute like she is with hair woman because she hates her because she is a weirdo and she is just weird because she is like a blonde and she doesn’t like her English because she think that she is insane and she hates her gym teacher too because she hates that she has a great free-throw shot and her gym teachers loves that Melinda has a great free-throw shot because she takes her time that she is going to get an A if she is the designated free-throw shooter.   

I think that she is going to like him because he likes to use his imagination and she is just going to be a great student in Mr. Freeman class because he is just an awesome teacher because if I was in his class I would love to be in my imagination, so I think that she is going to connect with Mr. Freeman because he is like an awesome teacher just to get an awesome teacher like him

4 comments:

katia said...

i agree with that because in art she can draw about what ever she wants and her teaches supports it. so it makes it easier for her to express her emotions on paper without actually telling anyone. and on the paper her drawings can mean anything.

jon said...

I don't know that you got all the facts straight because her free through saved her from failing Gym.

sam said...

I agree with that. teachers are always supposed to be nice to students. Some times they make a connection.

Erick said...

I agree with you. But it is a little confusing to me. Mainly because you made one run on sentence on the bottom of that last paragraph, but overall I think that it was good.