Barack Obama did not grow up with a father; also he had to move in with his grandparent because his parents were going through a divorce. So, he went to school enrolled in Esteemed Punanahou Academy he graduate with academic honors and he spoke against the Iraq war during a rally at Chicago’s Federal Plaza.
Obama’s father left him at age two years old and his mother. Obama was six years old he lived with his in Honolulu, Hawaii. As Obama was growing up he was struggling from self growing. He became angry and disillioned at the world around him that he turns to alcohol and drugs, but he Attened School at Esteemed Punanahou academy. He graduated with academic honors in 1979.
The greatest accomplishment for Barack Obama is that every speech that he gives it’s true what he says in his speech’s about challenges he will say the challenge’s that he face it’s real, serious there are many and it will not be easy or short pan of anytime and he’s really good at saying the right words with out defending people.
Obama faces challenges in his life like racism he knew that people will look at him because of his skin. Obama has overcome adversity and challenges. One way he did this was racism. He knew that he was gonna go through racism so he didn’t give up. He keeps going. He lost his father at the age of two years old. Obama had to struggle with self growing and he turn to the world with anger then he turn to alcohol and drugs. One day he thought about what he went through in his childhood and teenage hood that he can make his life better but he knew there was gonna be challenges to make things better in his life.
Obama went through a lot he knew that it’s not gonna be easy he knew that he had to go through challenges to make thing better. He was a good speaker front of everybody so people understand what he was saying because he knew what to say. If we think like Barack Obama what we been through it’s not easy to change we got to go through it’s challenge to make things better..
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6 comments:
1-Good job telling about him in a general way.
2-Describe things better, use proper grammar and spelling, tell about his greatest accomplishment, don't be so repetitive and general.
3-I didn't know that his father walked out on him and his mother when he was 2 years old.
In my personal oppinion I don't like Obama. I like how you mentioned that people don't like him because he's black and its true. You should have gone deeper in to his education since that's a huge thing for him. I didn't know where he was born, good job.
Over all the paper was really full of facts about him and his challenges that he went through. It would of bin better if you would of talked more about his problems when he was older, rather then focusing on his child hood and him running for the president .
1. You did good on putting your periods and commas.
2. In some of it didn't really make a lot of sense.
3.That he did drugs and alcohol.
Shaunda, I like how you have complete facts in your paper. Something that you could've changed would be the length because it was short and not use "Obama" so much. I learned that he lived with his grandparents. I didn't know that. You think I should know more about him since he is the President of the United States!
You did an amazing job on describing his childhood and how he was good at explaining what his opinion was in school. You could work on your grammar a little more. I thought Obama lived a good wealthy life as a kid. Now I no he didn't.;
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