Friday, March 11, 2011

Disappointed



I am the master of my world
I sit here unafraid
Unafraid of this punishment
Punishment that I made fate
Fate is what takes me

Takes me to a place
A place of hurt and agony
Agony I can’t push away
Away I will get

As I think of this pain
Pain I will have as I feel ashamed
Ashamed of my life
This life I was master of
Master of my fate
Fate to be punished
Punished but unafraid

7 comments:

dillon said...

i guess i like the poem and how you expressed your self

Sirena Pino said...

this was so good,cause we do choose our own fate. But its what we make of it. And thats cool that you are unafraid because im so scared

gUsTaVo V said...

i liked your poem tyler it reminds me of mine. this poem was preaty cool. and yea we do make life what we want it to be.

Erick said...

I love this poem. Not only because you expressed your self in it. But also because you took a lot of time and put a lot of thought into it.It reminds me of when i didn't take fate seriously. Because now i know that we do decide our own fate

nay said...

i like your poem it makes me think how life is so short and we should live it as baest as we can

Damian said...

i can relate to this poem by not showing fear for the choices i make or my fate because you can't always fight it and thats what i believe so why fear it

daniel s said...

you sound like a really strong person inside and outside. This is just by reading what you wrote and I think you should let others know you