My heart is filled with agony.
She is filled with agony.
She is in a bad relationship with him
I am in a great relationship with her.
She doesn’t know that she is my queen
I didn’t know that I am her king.
We will be together soon
I will make a boom
She will give me a wink
I will give her a stink
I like her but, her boyfriend is a crapper
Because I am a wonderful rapper.
She is a wonderful women
I am a wonderful he man
She wants me
I want her
She is a pretty women
I am a fugally damn man.
My father is a ugly piece of crapping
I go around rapping.
I’ve got to have you baby
You got to have me.
9 comments:
great job on it. i like how it rhymed a lot. but you need to watch your language.
i really dont know what you mean or saying looks like you trying to put yourself down
good job on it..need to watch ur language t??
I like this poem. You definately love this girl. You need to not call yourself a fugally man. I dont know you, but pretty sure your not fugally, have a little more confidence in yourself.
I like the way you made it rhyme. It's really funny. I think you did well but at parts it don't make no seance. Can i ask what the meaning of your poem is?
Overall nice work. I like how you put your feelings in it. My favorite lines are "She doesn’t know that she is my queen."
"I didn’t know that I am her king." Because it reminds me of my relationship.
i think you did good but it sometimes didnt go together that good. you could have used better words for it.
I like this poem a lot though it makes me wonder why you wrote it and who it was about. I think that if you put your mind to it you can write andything that who knows can be great some day. I liked the way it flows too.
I like this poem a lot though it makes me wonder why you wrote it and who it was about. I think that if you put your mind to it you can write andything that who knows can be great some day. I liked the way it flows too.
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