Life isn’t fair to me.
And I don’t care either.
Sit down man take a break
And while your at it take a breather.
While I shower you with this lyrical game.
To show you how to do it out any shame.
When I crush you man I’ll take the blame.
Once your kissing the pavement you’ll wish you never came.
So I’d come up with a game plan post haste.
Before I tear it up and lay your plan to waste.
Just let me know when you’ve had your taste.
Of the blood of the mud of your words in your own mouth.
Take a dive take a dip back to the dirty south.
Remember my name forever my name is trigger.
I just spit lyrics in your face.
So take that shiz joker
6 comments:
I think that your poem was very interesting. It makes me wonder what was really going on in your head when you decided to write it. A lot of times life isn't fair to a lot of people. Sometimes you just want to give up and say screw it. Sometimes you may want to dish out to others and the crap you have had to take as well. I like though that you choose to write about it rather then do some other things.
Well nice job but it sounds more like rap. maybe you should change your tittle or just talk a little more about how life is unfair to you. but nice job I like it.
wonderful poem trigger you are a great rapper and your right life isnt fair to anyone
I think you did good the title doesnt really go that good with it but the poem is still good it sounds a little more like a rap but its good.
Hey erick i feel the same way you do man i hate life also just may be because life right now is really not that good in my life butt its up to us what we make out of it.
hey erick
this poem you wrote reminds me alot of chuck norris. but dont worry thats a good thing...i think but let me just tell you that the poem really reminds me of my rough child hood. and i think that maybe you should get help for that problem.
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