I wake, but still feel in a dream
Look around but don’t know what this means
What have I done the previous night?
Who have I left in dark and in fright?
I need to fix all this mess
Need to stop all this wrong and regret
Lost on this path with no light
Try to get home and do what’s right
Every time I start to go home
I find myself tired and alone
Need to find my way out of this place
I need to get back to home base
Please let me find some answers
So I can stop this cancer
If I find my way out of this mess
I can become my own very best
6 comments:
I like this one it shows that you have been throw a lot an have messed up ,an now your trying to get back up. I have also messed up an went throw the wrong path an im getting back up. my favorite line is (I wake, but still feel in a dream). Nice job.
I lovee this. My favorite line is "I wake, but still feel in a dream." Sometimes i feel like that too. You'll find your way out.
"need to gefix all this mess need to stop all this wring and regret"
that was my favorite line cecause you always wanna fix what you have done cause you regret what had happened. but life is what you make it. I love this poem!!
i like itt and my favorite line is ..I find myself tired and alone because yeah
I like it a lot. If I had to choose a favorite line it'd have to be "I wake but still in a dream." Because that's the way it is in my life it feels like I'm in a dream even when I'm awake.
i really like this poem. i really like the first line. but you shouldnt regret anything just move on an make your life how you want it to be.
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