No one listens
To what I have to say
I’m tired of this
Drowning in sorrow
Not living for to tomorrow
Happiness won’t follow
Tonight
It’s not about race
It ain’t about color
Not about revenge
Or about dollars
This is my
Sea of sorrow
Don’t wonna wake up tomorrow.
Drowning in a
Sea of sorrow
Knowing happiness won’t follow
Floating on a
Sea of sorrow.
4 comments:
Nice job I like it very much.Maybe you should of made it a little bit longer.
i love it. but i have to agree with Josefina. Because it's great but in my opinion I think it's too short. I can relate to this because I still feel like I'm drowning in my own sorrow.
thhis is pretty good its true its donst matter wat color sum1 is an i like ur title
i like how its short and you and every one knows what you mean by it cuz not all poems should be long
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