Friday, April 1, 2011

Melinda’s first year in High School.


    I would describe Melinda as a very shy person. I think hat Melinda is nervous about high school. It seems like she is unlikeable. I think she is worrying to much about her fitting in. if she just calms down and stops worrying about what people think about her she will get by in school. The reason she is unlikeable is because over the summer she called the cops at a party. She should have told someone in the first place.

     Her friends should at least give her a chance to explain what happened and why she called the cops. What I think she should do is go up to one of the girls and try and talk to them. If she tried that maybe that would help. She could talk to one of the counselors at her school. It would probably help her get through the drama at school. Maybe if she tried to talk to her friend Heather and see if she can help her talk to the girls. She should stop thinking about what she wants to do and just do it. The more she waits to try and make friends the harder its going to be for her in the future.

6 comments:

austin said...

I agree with her trying to fit in and i think she is worried also I think people hate her because she got raped at that party.

sam said...

disagree cuz kids in jr high never for give any one:)

tara said...

i totally agree with u on both parts.
i really liked the first part when u are talking about her shyness, because i can really agree with how being she can change your life i used to be very shy and let me just tell you that those years were the worst years of my life because i had trouble finding friends because i would ignore those who tried to associate with me. being shy is not a good way to live. and i also agree with u when you said that she should have told someone sooner when she was in that situation that way she might not have been in that horrible situation.

sam said...

I agree cuz id she bever called the cops this would of never happen. but she did maybe she should talk to her friends why she did. maybe she should talk to a councsler too.

Shaunda said...

I disagreed with the story because at school don't trust nobody yet intel you get to know them.

jesus v said...

I agree really agree with thizs
She is not likable. everyone glares at her .They are mean to her.
Every one always says things under their breath. nice job