Well I would describe her as some one that has low self worth. Mainly because she had been raped at a party. I can only imagine how much it could hurt or how much affect it could have on a lady after being raped. I know that I’d feel like life isn’t worth living any more especially if my friends wouldn’t even talk nor look at me the same any more and all they know is a lie and not the full story. And I would also be really angry. Because I would feel like they don’t even know who I am any more or if I even exist at all either.
Friday, April 1, 2011
Melinda
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Erick,
I would agree with you when you say that she doesn’t have very good self- esteem. I would have a very low self-esteem to if I was hurt the way she was and then having people being mean to me when I was just trying to get help. I don’t think it’s very fair the way others are treating her. I think they way that she is able to get up every morning and at least go to school is very strong of her. Melinda seems like a pretty cool person despite what she has had to go through.
i agree that she would feel unsafe and unhappy with people because you wouldn't feel in a safe invierment
i like how you expressed how and wat you would do if you were in her situation.
I agree she needs to be more talkable so that people can strat to know her better and she can make new friends like that to. She needs to stop being shy all the time. She needs to stop worrying about what people think about her.
i agree because she was raped. Know one know s how that feels. Or aleast her friends don't. It would be depressing to.
i agree with you 100% because it would hurt to get raped and lose freinds for trying to do the right thing. she is likable i think but only if people got to really know her. every one judges her and she cant even speak without feeling trapped.
You rock man. It sounds like you realy got into character with Melinda. Do you think that any one would believe her?
Did you seriously give away the whole story in your first sentence?! I think one thing you could work on is keeping the font the same. I think that this could be a really good post.
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