Chaotic and darkness started it all…
There was a man named Ka-lill, he appeared out of darkness he was very tall and had a look to him that evolved into peaceful bliss.
Ka-lill created the thought of yesterday that’s how he thought of everything he was dreaming. He dreamt that he was lonely, he needed a family when he awoke the next day there was a beautiful women named Enda, and two little kids on boy named Tatsu, and a baby girl named, Mackivelli.
The boy Tatsu was standing in the middle of a flower patch, the baby girl Mackivelli was lying on a cloud in the sky, and the beautiful women Enda was at the top of a mountain, Ka-lill took a step back and realized he had created these beautiful creations and elements he noticed he was standing in a beautiful blue sea.
Ka-lill smiled because he had discovered happiness, when he smiled a sun busted out into the sky and shined warmth and happiness upon the beautiful new creations.
Ka-lill was so proud of what he had created he ended up getting greedy. His greed was overcoming his happiness, he because very depressed, and violent. Edna, Tatsu, and Mackivelli decided that they were going to make there father be stuck on earth and loose everything that he has taken for granted. Over time the three of them saw that Ka-lill was regretting the decisions he had made, so the three of them slowly gave him thins that he had before and some extra things too, they gifted him with a new beautiful women, and then created man on earth, they gave him food (corn, pea-pods, and cows for meat).
Ka-lill was so great full for the gifts that he has been given
back to him and appreciated everything, he had finally gotten his happiness back. Everyday he still lives to show his gratitude for everything that had been given back to him and he has never had a dark day in his life since the beginning of time.
7 comments:
i like how you started our world. i like your gods names their pretty cool. i like your myth it was really good.
Kc i like your myth about how you said that the god create every thing and next thing you know he got greeding then he wasen't to happy what he had done.
You did great on it, however there were some spelling mistakes that i noticed. Did he ever get stuck on Earth? other than that you did great.
nice work. I like how you said chaotic and darkness started it all. I also like how you came up with really unique names for your gods. I thought you did great so keep it up
I really liked your story, it kept me intertained and you fit it all togather really well. Good Job!
i like your story u have a creative mind and thats good and i like the names of your gods like ka-lill
my favorite part was when ka-lill smiled a sun busted out into the sky.
thank you for the awesome myth. this one is definitely my favorite.
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