Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Goddess of Children

Once in a time in life lived the sun and the moon. The sun and the moon were really happy together. They were god and goddess so they would live forever and ever the moon was berry beautiful the sun could never see no one ells as his one and only. The moon gave light to those who had darkness. The sun a big guy that made every one happy when he came their way But they couldn’t come too close or they might get burn because of how handsome the sun was. The sun and the moon had many children on Earth the world that they had created was so beautiful. The sun and the moon were very loving to their children on earth and punished the evil ones that didn’t have respect for them. One night the moon seen one of her little ones crying in the dark the little ones name was Martin he was about 5 years old the little one cried and cried. The moon shined her light upon her little one to make him happy. He didn’t seen to be happy the moon dizzied to do something that she has never done for her kids before. She came down to comfort her little boy Martin. The moon came down to were the boy was for a few hours the world was looking kind of dark excepted for were little martin was. As the moon came down little Martin was a little scared he has never seen so much light in one place than as the moon got closer Martin saw her beauty and was not as afraid no more. The moon said to Martin what upsets you my child? The boy said, my mom don’t love me she is at home with other people drinking apple juice that taste really bad. The moon new a lot about martin and she new that martin was kicked out of his home by his mom because she was off getting drunk with men and sleeping with them. She also new that martin’s mom also abused him. She has seen how she punched the little one in the face. The moon told the boy that he will not suffer any more. The moon also told him that he didn’t have to cry no more because she had to come for him and that she was his real mom so he didn’t have to cry no more. the boy fell to sleep in the moons arms and the moon took him always to her home.

8 comments:

charity said...

josefina, i loved your story didn't know you were such a good writer your story was so unique and creative :)

charity said...

nate, i liked your story it was very creative and i can tell that you put a lot of thought into it good job:)

charity said...

megan, i liked your story i was vetry good you are very creative :)

charity said...

Erick, i liked your story it was very creative good job :)

Charity said...

KYle,i liked your story it was very creative i can tell that you put a lot of thought into your story:)

austin s said...

I liked your myth because you have a 5 year old in it that eventually grows up

Erick M said...

Great job Josephina.I liken how you put a lot of thought into it. all I got to say is keep it up homie remember there are always going to be better days.

Jon said...

WOW! Your story was awsome. The only thing that i can think of that you need to fix is some of the spelling was off. Your story made me realy depressed and i wanted to cry.