`In the beginning there was total darkness, out of darkness descended chaos. With chaos there is always good, so the earth was created. The earth was impregnated and she gave birth to two gods. Del Fuego and Lena were created. Together they made animals and plants and life on earth. After many years they had two dozen children which were strong powerful gods.
There were many wars and battles between Del Fuego’s children. Till one day his wife and he vanished creating a woman full of love and kindness. She was the first human, and here name was Liza. Some gods wanted her to die and some knew the good in here and knew her importance. So one day, Sun the oldest of the gods married her, and they bore two children one boy and one girl. All the humans looked just like the gods, but the gods could only be killed by other gods and they were very powerful.
Over the years the world multiplied and had lots of humans and the gods grew angry and they knew Sun would not let them kill the humans. He had promised Liza he would never let anything happen to the human race and when she died, she became the moon watching over her children. Eventually all of the gods called upon all the light in the universe and stars to take back what was there earth. They knew they needed lots of help to destroy there older brother Sun.
Many years Sun fought to save man, till one day he struck down all his brothers and sisters and he died with them. So man could live in peace, but Sun is now in the sky with his eternal love Liza. So man will always be indebted to there all saving Father in the sky.
8 comments:
Coy,
It is really good. Like I said last Friday that’s better than what I could have done. You sat at the computer what ten maybe fifteen minutes and you were done. I can’t spit something out like that. You said it was sort of corny but who cares as long as you like it and tried than it shouldn’t matter. Besides everyone has different opinions. What is stupid to one person may not be to another. Good job.
I liked your myth, it was well done! I liked how you gave it a romantic spin at the end. Good Job!
this story was good i think that if you tried to make it better it would be good i like how your gods created the world and stuff.
i think that coolest part is. that the sun and moon were married. and it was a good story.
Coy,
Good job on this one. You did great puting Gods into it, however how did Sun die with his brothers and sisters if he struck them down. Also where did the stars come from?
i think the coolest part of your myth is that you named your main god is named is DEL FEUGO
coyyyyy!
i really like your myth i like how the sun had fought for man kind. but they did have a lot of babys. ha. i like how man ended up living in peace! i think it is really good! good job:)
i think this is good. i like how you described the story.
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