There was darkness in the world intil one day there was one drop on something it became the earth so he knew that the earth need a sky so Randy create a rain drop it became the sky named Randy Jr. so he was the sky he was happy he was the sky so the god of the earth Randy had a child name Randy Jr. he was the son of randy who create the earth then Randy thought the earth need a sun so he had a daughter name Beyonce’ she was really beautiful she was the sun because she is bright all the time so Beyonce’ was the daughter of Randy.
Randy thought the earth needed some water so he had a other daughter name Carly she was like a mermaid a really beautiful mermaid so Randy Knew that carly was gonna live in the water so carly was happy that she was create so she can be on earth and Randy was thinking what does the earth needs so one day he thought that the earth need mountains so he create a son name Isaac he was the creation of the mountains then Randy thought that the earth need plants so he create a daughter name Isabel she was really Beautiful like Carly and Randy had really beautiful daughters.
7 comments:
i think your gods are realy cool but they have simple names. i think if you made it longer that it would be better. i like your creation.
Shaunda your story was awesome.!! I like how you put differnt names in there. I think it could have been longer but it was still good. Keep up the great work.
i liked how he can create daughters and sons just when ever he wants. like the one who made mountains. and the one who makes plants.
shaunda i like you myth! you worked really hard on it, i really enjoyed reading it! i thought it was really creative how you created everything! good job girl!
One question, who is Randy? I think that if you gave more detail it would have made more sense. I also noticed that you there were a few common spelling errors.
I like your story because you have a creative mind so, keep going.
Really good story, you have potential, i loved it. GOod JOb!
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